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Mar 9, 2011, 5:48:22 PM
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The Loneliness by primalfuryan The Loneliness by primalfuryan
:iconmikkolagerstedt:The loneliness in the room of heart when someone legendary named as Eaven said i want to see what you can make for this contest i made this and I had other one in my sleeves but sadly i am very busy and might cross the time limit of contest For now this is what loneliness means according to me:iconaloneplz::iconmikkolagerstedt:
MEDIUM:Watercolors
SONG: Enigma - I love you i will kill you www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOgBG6…
PS:I wonder if Pablo Picasso was here would he appreciate my art (ahem he is my inspiration) what do you think :iconiruhamu: and Offcourse :iconeaven: :icongrin-plz:
PSS: Participating in this awesome contest news.deviantart.com/article/14…
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Firstly, I think this is a very interesting piece: it has a distinct colour palette and a very specific theme.
I find it is often easier to critique in the following way:

Vision - 4.5:
You had a very clear vision for this piece which can be seen in the layout and the final result. Your use of sombre colours and a silhouette emphasise the theme of the overall piece.
I feel that you could have developed the birds a bit better, they seem lost amid the yellow haze, although this may be intentional.

Originality - 3.5:
I have seen the theme of loneliness represented in this way before, but I admire your use of the main tree. I like how you have sectioned the piece off by using the silhouttes. It works well.

Technique - 4:
I have awarded you 4 for technique. I think you could have improved in your use of the paints (acrylic?). The piece seems slightly wonky, or is this due to the position of the camera?
As I have mentioned above, I believe you could have developed the birds a bit more. They seem a bit flimsy, lost amid the yellow mess. This does emphasise your theme though.

Impact - 4:
Your painting does evoke a sense of sadness or loneliness due to the sombre and depressing colours. The use of blocks of black and muddy yellow causes one to think of the theme and title of the piece.

Note for the future: Try reducing the flash on your camera. It reflects badly off acrylic paints and can detract from the finished piece. I suggest placing your camera on a tripod or several stacked books and taking a long exposure photograph in order to pick out the details. But otherwise, great work and keep it up!
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virnagray Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very pretty:)
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KarahRobinson-Art Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love this work :love:
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Stroody Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fabulous !
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Beru-chiii Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
As I saw your work, I thought how beatiful. Your vision of loneliness is too warm for me. 

I dont see loneliness in your work. I see hope,  chance to fly like those birds, freedom.

That green color feels like it has yellow or ochre in it, so that color appear warm and soothing effect. Maybe that is what you wanted to show I dont know. So I would like to know. 

As that greenish has bigger space on your work than blue which to my eyes is cold, so all work apper warm.
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
PS:Its always the prospect and vision , someone see loneliness in blue some in night some in day,can you imagine a person that cant fly seeing someone else flying with its group when you alone standing in a place where no one want to visit you , you wither (ahem ahem)
I like your critique ,you have good art eye Beru hime:hug::iconzardo:
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pjenz Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is beautiful and emotional, love it :heart:
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing Jenn:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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pjenz Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very very welcome :heart:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Professional Writer
This is so lovely... :aww:
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing dear David!:hug::icontulipplz:
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BiBiARTs Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
excellent drawing :love:
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing dear Bibi!:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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LUCILALEYLA Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful work :love: 
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing dear Lucila!:huggle::icongimmeheartplz:
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LUCILALEYLA Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
With much pleasure dear DJ :huggle: 
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scornedlove Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
beautiful work!
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:hug::icontulipplz:
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m-gosia Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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Augenss Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist
hey i featured you on my blog [link]
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
PS:To be featured on Tumblr , you are welcome to visit my art anytime:hug::iconzardo:
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JocelyneR Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Stunning! I love it! :love:
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I am glad you do my dear:huggle::heart::iconraindanceplz:
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JocelyneR Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
This superb work is featured here: [link] . :icon1stbutterflykiss:


(Sorry for the delay, DA is always stopping me from sending comments.)
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
PS:You are very dear to me , so please donot be sorry i am glad to be connected and being featured by you , i hope you doing well:hug::iconzardo:
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surrealistic-gloom Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
This amazing work is featured in my latest journal [link] . :heart:
Awesome painting! :love:

P.S. Sorry for the delay, DA was always stopping me by telling me I was spamming.
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
PS:I donot mind being late or anything , i just want you to be happy and safe thats more important:hug::icongimmeheartplz:
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Shades-Of-Lethe Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Featured: [link] :heart:
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
You are always such a sweetheart , you do know that right?(GRIPS YOU CLOSER HUGS YOU TIGHT)well i hope you are beign happy and doing well like always Tania!:heart::huggle:
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Shades-Of-Lethe Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Breathtakingly beautiful... you have captured the sense of solitude so excellently and dramatically... atmospheric and wonderful work.. !!
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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heartinart Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful art! Full of feeling!!
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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heartinart Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are so kind! :heart:
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
Lets say we both are kind to each other!:tighthug::heart:
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busangane Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Featured here: [link]
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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clear-blue-ocean Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Professional Artist
I like this. I can see Picasso's influence. It also reminds me of a piece by Van Gogh (Wheat Field With Crows), both because of the birds & the feelings that it evokes (within me at least!)

I just noticed that you use watercolors for most of your paintings! Yet they're so vibrant. I love seeing that in watercolors. Good job :-)
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
PS:Van Gogh and Picasso are still consider in top ten all time artists , i love watercolors more then other paints:hug::icongimmeheartplz:
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Stefymoondust Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
wonderful, feel the loneliness in it
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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asmaa-rabiaa Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Wonderful ARt & great Design my dear friend i really love it soooo very much :heart: :rose: :aww:
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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ttvl Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Inspiring piece!
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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Unbearable-Lightness Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
Your beautiful art has been featured in

Time: A Gallery Show
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#Art-Express
Artistic Expression
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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i-n-a-h Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
nice work :)
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing:huggle::iconbeauroseplz:
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lordfreedom Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Amazing work.
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