The loneliness in the room of heart when someone legendary named as Eaven said i want to see what you can make for this contest i made this and I had other one in my sleeves but sadly i am very busy and might cross the time limit of contest For now this is what loneliness means according to me MEDIUM:Watercolors SONG: Enigma - I love you i will kill you www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOgBG6… PS:I wonder if Pablo Picasso was here would he appreciate my art (ahem he is my inspiration) what do you think and Offcourse PSS: Participating in this awesome contest news.deviantart.com/article/14… FEATURED BY: PSSS:Please don't use my Artwork(s)without my written permission.
Firstly, I think this is a very interesting piece: it has a distinct colour palette and a very specific theme. I find it is often easier to critique in the following way:
Vision - 4.5: You had a very clear vision for this piece which can be seen in the layout and the final result. Your use of sombre colours and a silhouette emphasise the theme of the overall piece. I feel that you could have developed the birds a bit better, they seem lost amid the yellow haze, although this may be intentional.
Originality - 3.5: I have seen the theme of loneliness represented in this way before, but I admire your use of the main tree. I like how you have sectioned the piece off by using the silhouttes. It works well.
Technique - 4: I have awarded you 4 for technique. I think you could have improved in your use of the paints (acrylic?). The piece seems slightly wonky, or is this due to the position of the camera? As I have mentioned above, I believe you could have developed the birds a bit more. They seem a bit flimsy, lost amid the yellow mess. This does emphasise your theme though.
Impact - 4: Your painting does evoke a sense of sadness or loneliness due to the sombre and depressing colours. The use of blocks of black and muddy yellow causes one to think of the theme and title of the piece.
Note for the future: Try reducing the flash on your camera. It reflects badly off acrylic paints and can detract from the finished piece. I suggest placing your camera on a tripod or several stacked books and taking a long exposure photograph in order to pick out the details. But otherwise, great work and keep it up!
I humbly appreciate your gracious visit,comment,remark on this artwork ,stay amazing
PS:Its always the prospect and vision , someone see loneliness in blue some in night some in day,can you imagine a person that cant fly seeing someone else flying with its group when you alone standing in a place where no one want to visit you , you wither (ahem ahem)
I like your critique ,you have good art eye Beru hime